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.:Say Good-Night Ashfur:. by hakura-lives .:Say Good-Night Ashfur:. by hakura-lives
:D I finally drew the Ashfur Picture! As you can see the "Draw Hollyleaf Killing him" Won the most popular in the votes. At first i was like :nuu:"!!!!!" But it's what my watchers wanted so I aim to please you all :D

This wonderful idea was given to me from :icondapuddingz: and they said i should "Draw him glaring up at Hollyleaf just as he dies :3 And make Hollyleaf look totally insane... now THAT would be one epic picture" ~So i did!

;A; I hope everyone well love this, this peice has to be the longest one i've ever worked on with paint. 72 hours and in pain agh! :faint:
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Oh, I love this! It's beautiful work that captures the scene in the book, I just love it! Just as I have found a few things in this image that might need some changing, I have also seen many wonderful points in the picture. First of all, I love Ashfur's expression, it's just as I would of imagined it in my head. And, Hollyleaf, it makes me wonder, was she really insane? But, there are some things about Hollyleaf that might need changing. First of all, she looks a little...buff. Maybe taking away some of the fur, and she would look a little more feminine. Also, her paw that is stretched up to the sky looks a little awkward. It doesn't very much look like cat anatomy. Hollyleaf's other paw (the one on Ash's neck) looks a little off on the second picture. If her paw was on his neck, it would be closer, or bigger in the picture. Other than that, Hollyleaf looks amazing! As for the first side, I have noticed some other things. Mainly I've only noticed things about the ground. When coloring it, I would keep it going in the same direction, or about the same. You used multiple colors, which I love. This way, you can make the ground look real, but, making it real has it's disadvantages. Maybe the way you drew it was what you were going for, maybe it wasn't. And, that brings me to the water. The water around Ashfur seemed to loose it's color. The light blue and white are gone around Ash's ears,hair, etc that is over the water. I'm not sure if that is what you wanted, but if it is, I do like it. If it's not, I just wanted to point it out for you. Now, I'm not a wonderful drawing myself, your art is way better than mine, so, I'm not trying to sound...disrespectful in any way. This is one of my favorite drawings of yours, I truly love it! The backgrounds are beautiful, and the moon up in the sky is gorgeous. Don't get me wrong. I'm not saying that this picture only have bad things in it, because that's not true! I find the picture interesting in so many ways, and, I hope I helped you out at least a little.! ;D
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I liked it, very much in fact. The only thing I don't like is how Hollyleaf looks. She looks a bit...odd in my eyes. She looks like a muscular tom, not a she-cat. I also really don't like Hollyleaf's expression, creepy smile...I just don't see it. Another thing, I don't like how far up Hollyleaf rose her paw. Other than that, it's beautiful, and just amazing. I also love Ashfur's expression in the picture, and how I wish he didn't have to die! Ashfur is so pretty! Well, I love how you did the ground, it was so well done. I love the way you did the tree bark and the leaves. Another thing I absolutely ADORED was the sky, and how you made it look like a comic book.

Overall, this drawing is wonderful, and I absolutely adore it!
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xXRainbowDubstepXx Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
Assfur got it coming o3o
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Momodu56 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
oooooooooooooooooooooooh i looooooooove it *o*
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hakura-lives Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I'm so glad you do~♡
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XxNature-And-FnafxX Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
holy crap dude thats awesome (and wow, YOU DREW THIS IS MSPAINT?!?!)
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hakura-lives Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw thank you~! :dummy:  And yes in a manner of fact I did draw this on ms paint. I mainly use it for drawing out digital artwork~!
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Ask-Fem-Ashfur Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014
I WILL NOT!
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hakura-lives Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Will not what?
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killerrainbow123 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Student Artist
i never got any idea what i should draw cuz not many watch and coment
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Bread-Kittens300 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
luv it
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KittyKlaws Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
niiiiiiice.. but why hollyleaf so evil lookin? ( it does catch the attention though x3 hehe)
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shadowmayne96 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Very nice paws, i love the perspectives!
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CinnaTheKitty Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Errr mah gerd! i love your art so much!
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hakura-lives Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you i'm so glad you like my artwork :D
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CinnaTheKitty Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:3 No problem at all.:) (Smile) 
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bluestar-pawprints Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This.is.epic. :) Sooo beautiful! <3
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:iconhakura-lives:
hakura-lives Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you~! :D
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bluestar-pawprints Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sooo welcome! :)  If I could only fave this a thousand times... I would xD
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RedDiamondUmbreon Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Student General Artist
Nice.
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:iconhakura-lives:
hakura-lives Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you~! :D
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Miek-Kittenn Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
I do not mind I just feel sorry for him
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Miek-Kittenn Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
no no no it is not necessaryNo, I disagree! 
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:iconhakura-lives:
hakura-lives Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
would you care to explain to me why this isn't necessary; because i don't see what's so unnecessary about it. 
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caritox3 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
cool! :D
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LauryAliasBrumeRouge Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Filmographer
Omg *-* 
It's so beautiful! :P
I love your draw <3
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hakura-lives Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondragonshy2plz: oh you're making me blush! thank you so much!
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LauryAliasBrumeRouge Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Filmographer
Sorry my english is bad :o I wanted to say "It is normal" :)
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LauryAliasBrumeRouge Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Filmographer
<font><font>You're welcome ^^ <3</font></font>
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Zero-X-Souls Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love this piece somehow, I dont know why XD

Amazing work here.
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Bluebubblecat36956 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Amazing wok but so sad
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chole785 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just want to say...

The shading and shining is good. PLus, it's incredible that you are drawing on MSPaint. Honestly, you deserve something better! So really, the drawing is good. I just don't like WHAT you drew. Hollyleaf looks like an insane crazy monster and I'd rather see Scourge or Bone looking like that. Erin Hunter (yes- there are four, I don't know which) said Hollyleaf slipped and accidentally fatally injured Ashfur. So... 
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Hawkfrost123 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoa
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Rookie141 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hey, you're pretty good c: you should use Sai ^^
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TheShinyNinetales Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This looks great! And you drew this in paint to?! Wow, that's some awesome work!!!
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hakura-lives Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondragonsjy2plz: Oh thank you so much i'm so glad you like it~! And yes i draw on regular paint :)
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TheShinyNinetales Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My pleasure! And that's amazing for paint! ^-^
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Talon1223 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I dont think Hollyleaf WANTED to kill him, she thought it was the only way out. On my warriors group on Roblox, I had a char named Goldenriver who was like Ashfur, and Hollyberry, she was like Squirrelflight. And there was Talonpaw, Eaglepaw, and Hawkpaw. When Hawkpaw and her brothers were born, they wern't FULL Riverclan like Hollyberry. Thier mother was a Thunderclan medicine cat named Tigerpool. Tigerpool was blind, and she gave her kits to Hollyberry. Hawkpaw's father is Riverfoot of Riverclan, during a fire Goldenriver created(Out of insanity of grief) He trapped Hawkpaw and her brothers and Hollyberry revieled thhey weren't her kits. Goldenriver let them go but promised to reviel it at the gathering. The night of the gathering he was alone, Hawkpaw couldn't let him tell, she didn't know her parents. Memories flashed in her mind then she attacked Goldenriver. She was the runt, so she was faster and smaller. Goldenriver had expiernce and power, yet Hawkpaw had speed, and strength, she was also very clever being mentored by Willowshine, Hollyberry's REAL kit.  He got a few wounds on Hawkpaw but in the end she got the avantage but getting him tired then slashing his neck, crushing his windpipe. His life flashed before his eyes: His mother being murdered, His father getting hit by a monster, his Mentor drowning(dont ask), Hollypaw(berry) reviling she loved Tigerpaw(blaze), her having her first litter(Daisypaw, Willowshine, Foxtail, Silverlight), then her second (Mossleaf, Mistyfur, Stonefoot) her third(Fuzzykit, Shadowkit, Lightkit) and betraying her clan taking Hawkpaw and her siblings as her own, and Hollyberry once again expecting kits, but never to say "goodbye" to Goldenriver. Go for the pic for the rest in Goldenriver's view, and Hawkpaw's veiw.
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Eclipsestar56211 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was WAY better than I did but you +fav  it! You have a talent.
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hakura-lives Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh thank you, you just made my day~! :icondragonshy2plz: 
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This Picture's Very Amazing! High Lmao Smiley Emoticon Haruka Saigusa (Guess Who) [V2] 
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hakura-lives Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh thank you so much~! :D
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No Problem Romano Mustache Laughs 
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seanvol Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013   Traditional Artist
Whoa! cool picture, very energetic and dramatic
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hakura-lives Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconzoominplz: thank you so much i'm so glad you like it~!
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DimentedDestiny36O Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013   General Artist
This is just about the BEST Ashfur death pic I ever saw!!
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hakura-lives Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsqueeeeplz: oh yay i'm so thrilled you enjoy my work~
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therealmistflight Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
VERY VERY GOOD!!
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hakura-lives Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you so much~! :D
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therealmistflight Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Np
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BlueAlouArtist Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
wow XoX
amazing pic x3
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hakura-lives Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you~!!! :icondragonshy2plz: 
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